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Forum: Art, Writing, and Music Topic: Feedback on this story? |
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Posted: 07 Apr 2012, 12:26 pm
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| Sorry and thank you moderator! |
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Forum: Art, Writing, and Music Topic: Feedback on this story? |
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Posted: 07 Apr 2012, 12:25 pm
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| Here's another bit, if you'd like. Evan was awake, aware: That jostling of the RV. That sand-papering sound of the tires on the road. That rush-whistle of the wind. The sheeeroooom! Sheeeroooom! of cars passing. That girl who dreamt softly on his shoulder, breath tickling his arm. All of it whooshed... |
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Forum: Art, Writing, and Music Topic: Feedback on this story? |
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Posted: 07 Apr 2012, 12:16 pm
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| Thanks! It's part of a 10,000 word manuscript at the moment. I want to publish it, but I'm only fifteen. So there are complications. Thanks so much for reviewing! |
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Forum: Art, Writing, and Music Topic: Feedback on this story? |
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Posted: 07 Apr 2012, 10:36 am
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Forum: Art, Writing, and Music Topic: Feedback on this story? |
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Posted: 07 Apr 2012, 10:10 am
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| I'm writing a story, largely based on my experiences. I'd really like some feedback. Here's an excerpt. Brooke is my main girl character, a Jewish girl. Evan is my male main character, obsessed with outer space. They're talking to one another after Brooke has just had a rant about her feelings. Evan... |
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Forum: General Autism Discussion Topic: Parent's reaction to diagnosis of child? |
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Posted: 06 Apr 2012, 2:13 pm
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| I was wondering about the different reactions parents have concerning their children's diagnoses on the autism spectrum. Did anyone's parents react badly? I'm going to tell my mom, but I'm afraid. Advice and stories? |
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Forum: Love and Dating Topic: Any Girls wanna talk with me? |
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Posted: 06 Apr 2012, 8:10 am
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Replies: 53
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| You sound a bit Marxist, friend. ;P |
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Forum: Love and Dating Topic: Any Girls wanna talk with me? |
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Posted: 05 Apr 2012, 9:06 pm
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| You certainly do poetic justice to your victory! But I'm afraid I don't understand. What souls, what secrets? |
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Forum: Love and Dating Topic: Any Girls wanna talk with me? |
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Posted: 05 Apr 2012, 6:52 am
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| Deciphered, friend. And what would Plato say to your philosophy? Perhaps he'd say something gnomic, perhaps something dealing with "other halves." In his Symposium , we are told of the “ladder of love,” by which the lover can ascend to direct cognitive contact with (usually compared to a kind of vis... |
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Forum: Love and Dating Topic: Any Girls wanna talk with me? |
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Posted: 04 Apr 2012, 7:58 pm
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| Thank you. I appreciate the compliment, but I really can't help but be honest. It's just something I am, and I have the hardest time lying. |
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Forum: Love and Dating Topic: Any Girls wanna talk with me? |
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Posted: 04 Apr 2012, 7:54 pm
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| I just answered his question. I would like to talk, and so I replied in the affirmative. I mean, that was what he wanted, correct? |
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Forum: Love and Dating Topic: Any Girls wanna talk with me? |
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Posted: 04 Apr 2012, 7:44 pm
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| Is that a particularly good thing? Or a bad thing? |
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Forum: Love and Dating Topic: Any Girls wanna talk with me? |
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Posted: 04 Apr 2012, 7:37 pm
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| Eh, I really do appreciate how clever you've made me out to be, with the "male" thing. But, I really just accidentally clicked the wrong one! Ha, ha! |
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Forum: Getting to know each other Topic: Does this sound "Aspie"? |
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Posted: 04 Apr 2012, 4:10 pm
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| Yep, sounds a bit Aspie. Though, it took me a few years and many incorrect diagnoses to figure out that I had Asperger's. Especially the part about "knowing what you want to do" but not knowing how to use social rules and things like that. Welcome to wrongplanet! |
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Forum: Getting to know each other Topic: Trying to be polite. |
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Posted: 04 Apr 2012, 4:08 pm
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| Welcome, fellow newcomer! |
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Forum: Getting to know each other Topic: Just need a friend! |
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Posted: 04 Apr 2012, 4:07 pm
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Replies: 19
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| I'm not an adult yet, but I'd still love to be your friend! How old is your oldest with suspected Asperger's? |
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