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sbourg
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21 Mar 2013, 3:27 pm

My husband who has AS, is starting a computer repair business and I have just finished his website. wanted to get you guy's opinion.


www.chrisbourg.wix.com/computers

thanks for checking it out. be honest please :)



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21 Mar 2013, 3:53 pm

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"Free PC Analysis & Estimates​"


You may want keep that as an introduction offer, or say that it is only valid through phone since going out to a customer (costing fuel/travel expenses) and spending time there finding the problem - costs money, or at least takes away money from not servicing some other customer that decides that they want help and want to pay.

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Currently, I only do services in my home office.

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​Cable Management: Get organized & full potential out of your space


You may want to explain what kind of services: If he is going to do cable management, how is he going to do that in his house for the customer? Stuff like that can make a customer wonder.


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22 Mar 2013, 9:25 am

The thing that I hated about the site, is that Java Script is required to be turned on, if it's not, all you get is a blank white page. --This is just a preliminary comment.

EDIT: Also, the layout is pretty screwy in Opera as well, as the layers don't render properly, but it's OK in Firefox 19.


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22 Mar 2013, 12:05 pm

Fogman wrote:
The thing that I hated about the site, is that Java Script is required to be turned on, if it's not, all you get is a blank white page. --This is just a preliminary comment.
Agreed - and insisting on enabling it before displaying anything annoys me enough to not enable it at all.


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