auntblabby wrote:
how many other people here have seen Harlan Ellison's original screen treatment of "city on the edge of forever"?
I have, and I've also seen the comic book series that Harlan Ellison personally approved that displays it.
It's a fine effort, although I'll never be able to displace my feelings about the ST episode, which I regard as a classic.
As I understand it, Yeoman Rand was already gone or about to be, so that element alone wouldn't have worked. The dope addict angle could have been good, but in a 48-minute episode, the treatment would have been shallow. They could have made it a double episode, as they did with
Menagerie/The Cage. I really thought that Ellison's treatment of Rodent was far better, though. Rather than just an aimless drunken bum, in Ellison's version he was a maimed World War I veteran. However, I don't like the implication that in either case that his death wouldn't have changed history. That's not just a matter of being charitable. To me, any change, no matter how small, is going to have an outcome sometime later down the timeline. Of course, adopting that approach would negate the whole point of trying to reverse whatever McCoy/Dope Addict did.