This is a poem i wrote thinking about being an AS teenager

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06 Jun 2011, 7:24 pm

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only one person so far has seen my entire thesis that i have currently, that was my AP English teacher last year who, as well as enjoying running marathons(he came in 2100th place out of 22,000 in the Boston Marathon last month) and English, also enjoys mathematics and science. Mr. Rhoades had actually been the one who pointed out the most fatal flaw in my thesis, the cancer issue, and so i have no way of continuing until the issue of cancer is fixed unfortunately im not sure how long that will take for todays scientists to cure it, but hopefully its cured when i actually join the field so that i can focus on the meat and potatoes of my work, it wasnt easy to think of this and it will be even harder to bring it to life

and im hoping no one else will see my entire thesis until i have completed it fully as well as completed school

Well i think its great that your thinking outside of the box, sorry i really wish i could join in on what your saying but im more of a supernatural and spiritual researcher than science. But if it helps i support your thesis all the way even though i only understood the part about dna, sorry the last science class i had was 9th grade basic biology lol. so dna is all we learned

thats why i did my best to explain as much of what i wrote as possible because what i say usually goes over most peoples heads

there are a few similar to this but utilizing nanobots to repair the body or to use stem cells and cloning to make organs for transplanting

im thinking MUCH bigger, im being bold and daring this is an organ NO ONE on earth or probably anywhere in the universe has seen before thats the beauty of it and mine they will be actually immortal, most theories of life extension they are only biologically immortal(unable to die of aging) but mine you can NEVER die aside from MAYBE decapitation or otherwise complete dismemberment i am not too sure yet what the physical limitations of this new human with the Synthetic Bio-Organic Organ will have at this point because of the infancy of technology required

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06 Jun 2011, 7:30 pm

i will not be here to answer any questions for the next few hours, im going to my grandmas to go swimming

but hopefully i will one day be able to see all my planning come to beautiful fruition and out of it will come a brand new humanity and with it we will have to rethink everything

i still need to theorize what the potential changes in our socio-economic society will be, what ramifications will this have to our way of life? wars will have to be rethought definitely but what will happen to our economy and government if people are not unable to age but POSSIBLY unable to die as well? i REALLY need to work on that so i can formulate the best possible scenario of what is to come in the new chapter of humanity

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09 Jun 2011, 4:04 am

I write poetry as well, so I thought of writing one about AS, like what you did.. hopefully you guys will like it

(My world)

O how it hurt to be me
How would you handle it?
I wonder what my life would be

If I was normal… O if I was like you!
My life would be great
If you had my life, would you even follow through?

Would you just beg to have your normal life back?
You feel the rejection, the pain, the loneliness.. The hate
Wouldn’t that be just great?

Then I’ll take your place
But you know what?
I would help to be your brace

I wouldn’t be like you
Judging, laughing I would help you to follow through
So please, do the same for me.

bradt4evr
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09 Jun 2011, 10:32 am

mike_the_poet wrote:

Its a great poem!

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11 Jun 2011, 3:05 am

Thanks man

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