My first book failed to get a single agent to represent it, so onto the second and it's not fairing any better. It has been an agonizing affair of psychological and emotional torture, cause I assumed it was because I simply wasn't good enough. Now behold THIS response which has knocked me for such a loop my dumb founded expression remains on my face as I paste this:
Thank you for sending me a portion of your manuscript. I enjoyed reading it.
While your pages are interesting and well-written, after careful consideration, I feel that your project is not right for my list at the current time.
I wish you the best in finding the right agent who can successfully champion your project.
Now keep in mind I sent the manuscript first. She knew EXACTLTY what genre of book this was, knew EXACTLY what the premise was, and it was in fact these two things alone which got her to ask me to send her the manuscript. Then she says she liked it, that it's good, but she still won't represent it.
Okay, so it doesn't even matter how good and appealing my premise or work are? What f*****g standard do they use, throwing darts at a board of manuscript titles? This whole time I thought the agent saying "this work doesn't suit us" was just a nice way of saying it sucks, but apparently they just don't want to do it. So even if I have a great premise, conveyed as excitingly and grippingly as possible in my query letter, and my book was the best thing ever written, it would still be rejected. Of course I'm not saying I've written anything that good, but hyperbole can be an effective conveyor.
At this rate, PublishAmerica is starting to look enticing.