Aspie of Coz

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It is a simlar story to Wizard of Oz,

It starts as an girl called Donna who worked at a sewer with her parents, she hated it, she wishes to be an actress, she had a dog called Tennant, who was scottie, there was a thunder storm, Donna and Tennant went in the house, with they got sucked, they landed in Aspie of Coz, they....

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…sprang from her bed and with Tennant at her heels ran and opened the door.
The girl gave a cry of amazement and looked about her, her eyes growing bigger and bigger at the wonderful sights she saw.
The cyclone had set the house down, very gently—for a cyclone—in the midst of a country of marvelous beauty. There were lovely patches of greensward all about, with stately trees bearing rich and luscious fruits. Banks of gorgeous flowers were on every hand, and birds with rare and brilliant plumage sang and fluttered in the trees and bushes.

A little way off was a small dry creek bed, gratefully silent to a little girl who had lived so long in the rushing sewers.
While she stood looking eagerly at the strange and beautiful sights, she noticed coming toward her a group of the queerest people she had ever seen. They were not as big as the grown folk she had always been used to, but neither were they very small. In fact, they seemed about as tall as Donna, who was a well-grown child for her age, although they were, so far as looks go, many years older.

Three were men and one a woman, and all were oddly dressed. They wore round hats that rose to a small point a foot above their heads, with little bells around the brims that tinkled sweetly as they moved. The hats of the men were blue; the little woman's hat was white, and she wore a white gown that hung in pleats from her shoulders. Over it were sprinkled little stars that glistened in the sun like diamonds. The men were dressed in blue, of the same shade as their hats, and wore well-polished boots with a deep roll of blue at the tops.