dream to be free!

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13 Sep 2008, 8:41 am

i dream to be free,
to just be lie'ing under a tree
not being trapped in fake smiles
and no more people yelling at me

i want to stand somewhere
without people who care
scared of being forced to act
always people who stare

i would love to gain weight
without people who look at you
and suddenly HATE

dream to climb a mountain
without laws countion
its a dangerous world out there
but who simply care

the law is there to protect me
but all i see is that im robbed of being free!

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13 Sep 2008, 8:53 am

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jTugeLRZ6GI

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13 Sep 2008, 2:46 pm

I like your poem alien.

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"Mother Freedom"

Freedom - keep walkin'
Keep on your toesand don't
stop talkin' 'bout
Freedom - get goin'
Lots to be learned and lots
to be knowin' 'bout
People - gotta reach 'em
Sit 'em right down and then you
gotta teach 'em 'bout
Freedom - gotta win it
Gotta put yourself smack dab in it

Hey tomorrow
Now don't you go away
'Cause freedom
Just might come your way

Freedom - keep tryin'
People stay alive and
people keep dyin' for
Freedom - so don't lose it
Ya gotta understand ya just can't abuse it
Freedom - get movin'
Never gonna stop till
everybody's groovin' on
Love for - one another
Callin' some friend and
callin' some brother

Hey tomorrow
You're not so far away
Mother freedom
we'll know you well someday

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13 Sep 2008, 3:12 pm

thanks but whats this something you wrote to?

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13 Sep 2008, 3:13 pm

This sounds like a world I want.

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13 Sep 2008, 3:45 pm

nice poem mann... i like simple poems.. simplicity is often the most thought provoking.. if it's too specific then it leaves less room for imagination.

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13 Sep 2008, 5:06 pm

yhe just felt like writing it suddenly

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