tdgkf wrote:
I didn't like this part:
"The man inside the car turned around and smiled idiotically at them. Falotico gave him very explicit instructions to slowly get out of the car and put his hands up on the roof. The man obeyed, still smiling... Still smiling his moronic smile, he answered, 'I'm Sam. David Berkowitz.'"
Was it really necessary to say he smiled idiotically and had a moronic smile? I mean, really now.
one can't really have empathy for a serial killer, specially if he was smiling as a moron
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