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Snowy Owl
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25 Apr 2005, 7:33 pm

ed wrote:
I really like the paper.

Because it is for college, I'll point out one grammatical error (or typo) you may have missed:


The word "common" should be "commonly."

Honest, that's not to criticise your great paper, but to help.


Yep, I caught that one, and I also said "with" where I should have said "without" in the floodgate of the senses sentence.


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25 Apr 2005, 8:24 pm

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Even still

fix this as well


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