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DrizzleMan
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16 Oct 2005, 3:21 am

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There was a young man from Japan
Whose poetry just wouldn't scan
When informed this was so,
He replied, 'yes I know...
But I always try to fit as many words into the last line as I possibly can!


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16 Oct 2005, 10:54 am

DrizzleMan wrote:
Quote:
There was a young man from Japan
Whose poetry just wouldn't scan
When informed this was so,
He replied, 'yes I know...
But I always try to fit as many words into the last line as I possibly can!


OWWW! It hurts! :P



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16 Oct 2005, 1:06 pm

Welcome to the dark side of poetry 8) :wink:

On the other side, Kipling had a pretty flawless sense of rhythm.


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