How to make a thesis statement? Help!!

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Dussel
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16 Mar 2009, 7:21 pm

whitetiger wrote:
It is better to ask for the central antagonism embedded in problem.


I definitely go deeper than that when I write, but for a beginner to understand how to do a thesis, I would assume they want something simple to begin with. I was a special ed teacher and am currently a special ed tutor, which is one reason I simplify things.[/quote]

There is a deeper problem: Without understanding the anti-thesis, you never understand the thesis. So it just a technique to show that you understood what you are writing about.

But I see there is problem: They have a strong tendency to get over complicated and hard to read. In the German speaking world it even developed into an old and very strong prejudice: Any text which is easy to read or understand can't have any real academic merits.



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16 Mar 2009, 8:00 pm

We're in total agreement, Dussel.

If you only knew how long it often takes to teach a high school student how to forumulate a simple main idea, you would see why I didn't go into full detail about the antithesis. You have to start somewhere.

I completely agree with you that the antithesis is essential. In fact, I teach writing for a living.


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