kraftiekortie wrote:
Very nice, Ezra.
I would bet that you actually experienced what you wrote down. You have an excellent memory for details
Your writing actually reminds me of Herman Melville---such detail!
You should read Herman Melville, I believe he will light a fire in you.
This is what writers do mostly----write on their own experiences, and add a little fiction to embellish it.
Oh yeah Moby Dick. I read a few pages of that a while ago. Had a little trouble following it. Dickens too. The writing style of the day. Not as bad as trying to follow Shakespeare though. I was thinking maybe it had too much detail. Like big story, better put in lots of detail. I am thinking now maybe write out the highlights and fill in the details later. I was really actually inspired by Ray Bradbury's Dandelion Wine and Something Wicked This Way Comes (both based on his childhood and home town). Don't really know what the story will be exactly. Just quirky town folk and unusual happenings. The settings will be based on where I live now: the coast, the wharf, the lighthouse, downtown, the old buildings and shops, city hall, police station, library, courthouse clock tower, the large old houses, spooky old cemetery at the edge of town. If I was on a desert island with no video games it would probably be finished by now lol.