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Ghosthunter
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06 Mar 2006, 4:41 am

This is a quick poem I wrote and felt inspired to
create a eerie sounding video for.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=99SjeidjTdo

this is the site for the video portion. Just for
the record, the video portion was quickly
slapped together so I will include the basic
words of the poem in this posting.

Dark Poem wrote:
Swat me not! As you will invite me
forward then shun my true
Creativity as the truth was
I never was their, but the fly
on your table as you ignore my
creativiy Which is the equivelent
of inviting me then swating me
away.

You say you are my friend yet what makes
me creative has no place in your group,
thus I only exist. Silence me not on the table
called friends For I am not but a fly to your
table as you seem to want to make me!


The video quality is poor and the sound is eerie
though, and I hope you like this dark poem.

Sincerely,
Ghosthunter



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06 Mar 2006, 9:40 am

You very much have a way with word, GH.

Your poems tend to be haunting and universal. Very well done.

BeeBee