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do you think the book is a good idea
yes 67%  67%  [ 4 ]
no 33%  33%  [ 2 ]
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MONIQUEIJ
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01 May 2010, 8:18 am

i'm thinking about writing a book about a guy, who always looks down on people with disabilities
one day, after he transfer to a privet school he notice that mostly every one in his school has a disability but also notice that the student academic performance is way of head of what he ever could get too. he then become a out caste and laugh at. something like that. any advice, but please no criticism lol OK that too. i just think it be something good for teacher to give kids who bully those who are different.



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01 May 2010, 8:23 am

What about physical disabilities?
Or is this book about the difficulties of having an invisible disability?
Would psychopathy be considered a disability?



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01 May 2010, 9:03 am

ursaminor wrote:
What about physical disabilities?
Or is this book about the difficulties of having an invisible disability?
Would psychopathy be considered a disability?


i was thinking physical disibilty such as cerebral palsy. and i was going to try to touch based with disorder i was familiar with but you do have a point a lot of what i said was manly developed mental delays, i guess cause that what i witnessed being talk down upon.



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01 May 2010, 11:16 am

Please tell me that English is not your first language, and that you do not plan to use it to write this book. I'm not trying to be mean, but that post was barely understandable.

As for the book, it really needs work. You should take some classes, if possible. I don't exactly understand the twist you're trying to create.


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01 May 2010, 3:11 pm

Apera wrote:
Please tell me that English is not your first language, and that you do not plan to use it to write this book. I'm not trying to be mean, but that post was barely understandable.

As for the book, it really needs work. You should take some classes, if possible. I don't exactly understand the twist you're trying to create.



yes English is my first language. thinks for pointing out to me about how i wrote it,
i'm so use of doing free verse poetry where most of the time i forget how to write normal.
in i need the post to be understandable if i suspect anyone to answer it. so i wrote my question over thanks. and as for the twist the twist is instead of the students with special need getting put down by this guy they decide to give him a dose of his own medicine. :D :) :o :lol: 8)