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18 Jan 2013, 2:43 pm

Hello there.

I've for a long time planned to write about how I've coped with asperger's.

So I've started a "writing project" where I share my ideas. I've currently made two articles public, but got some other texts unfinished or planned.

I want to ask you what you think about the (two) articles that I've written so far. If they aren't helping anyone, I'm just wasting my time. This project drains my energy and I don't really have the time for it, so that's why I really need some feedback at an early stage. This is the best place that I can think of to ask.

It really drains my energy, so please don't encourage me to continue this thing if it isn't stead or in your interest :P, even if you just want to say that it's helpful to be nice. What do the articles really make you feel?

http://tinyurl.com/blogpreview123 (redirects to two articles.. that's what it is currently at least)

Now, this is by no means a promotion of anything. I don't need any promotion, that's not what this is. But I need feedback on the writing. But linking is the only way I can get feedback on the articles. The articles simply cannot just be pasted here, it's impractical and one of them is too long and so forth. If I can't assure that my writing matters, there's no way that I can continue the writing.



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18 Jan 2013, 4:59 pm

Interesting. Is the demand low to nearly none?



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18 Jan 2013, 5:46 pm

I am going to try and read them this weekend when I am home from work.


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18 Jan 2013, 5:50 pm

hyksos55 wrote:
I am going to try and read them this weekend when I am home from work.


Awesome! :) Thanks.



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18 Jan 2013, 5:54 pm

May I suggest that you give it a bit more time?

You posted at least one really big article (haven't looked at the other yet). There's a lot to process and consider in order to give anything like a valuable response. Also, remember, you aren't the only one for whom writing takes time. It's obvious you put a lot of thought into what you wrote. I wouldn't want to give you a quick, off the cuff response - that wouldn't be fair to you. But for me to compose a proper response may take until Monday or Tuesday.

Trust me, I know how hard it can be to wait, but be patient. :)



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21 Jan 2013, 7:43 pm

another_1 wrote:
May I suggest that you give it a bit more time?

You posted at least one really big article (haven't looked at the other yet). There's a lot to process and consider in order to give anything like a valuable response. Also, remember, you aren't the only one for whom writing takes time. It's obvious you put a lot of thought into what you wrote. I wouldn't want to give you a quick, off the cuff response - that wouldn't be fair to you. But for me to compose a proper response may take until Monday or Tuesday.

Trust me, I know how hard it can be to wait, but be patient. :)


Thanks for the tips :).

The problem is that I'm unsure whether the things I write matters or not, whether it's as useful as a Harry Potter book or if it really helps. In the former case it it drains my energy but helps nobody in return.