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Two words? How does that work? What are they, please?

The words are: 'Kamui' and 'Hiruko', and the first one is spoken in Part 2, and the second one is spoken in Part 10. Other than that, the characters interact non-verbally, and you get to know what they are feeling and thinking.

Thinking? Like a thought bubble with Garfield?

^No. It's a poem, not a comic. I just use descriptions to explain what they are thinking.
Here's the first part:

Dusk Prelude
A moon child fell through one night
Clothed only in celesicant light
As she fell into the river swift and broad
The river streamed so wild and fierce
Closed sharply over her fair head
Listlessly and lifelessly she lay
Like a mermaid pale and wan

A star child fell through one night
Clothed only in incandescent light
As she fell into the river swift and broad
The river raged so storm and untamed
Closed quickly over her fair head
Listlessly and lifelessly she lay
Like an undine pallid and drawn

A sun child fell through one night
Clothed only in luminous light
As she fell into the river swift and broad
The river roared so silently and tempest
Closed slowly over her fair head
Listlessly and lifelessly she lay
Like a selkie dark and lonesome

A wolf child fell through one night
Clothed only in silvery light
As he fell into the river swift and broad
The river draped as an affluent veil
Closed rapidly over his fair head
Listlessly and lifelessly he lay
On the flooded fluctuating surface

A fox child fell through one night
Clothed only in golden light
As he fell into the river swift and broad
The river silkily wavering darkly
Closed hastily over his fair head
Listlessly and lifelessly he lay
On the inundated undulating surface
A raven child fell through one night
Clothed only in ebony light
As he fell into the river swift and broad
The river currently flowing narrowly
Closed suddenly over his fair head
Listlessly and lifelessly he lay
On the drowned rippling surface

Sisina of the Moon grew willowy
Small as a blossoming flower
Long white hair as clean and flowing as moonbeams
Soft red eyes as delicate as budding roses
Framed her zebra-patterned face
Shyness, quietness, serenity
Yet her true beauty bloomed from her wondrous smiles

Anthea of the Sun grey fiery
Vibrant as an elegant aurora
A sunburst of white blond hair shimmered as a sun crown
One black eye and one white eye
Peered evenly from her pale sunrise face
Viviain, cheerful, optimistic
Yet her true beauty bloomed from her sunny nature

Elsie of the Stars grew brightly
Radiant as tiny fireflies drifting
A corona of pale, colourless hair covered her head
Large golden eyes shone keenly
Like the heart of a star from her opaline face
Aimable, honest, gentleness
Yet her true beauty bloomed from her tender kindness

Ishley of the Okami grew silently
Contemplative as a wandering brook
Long silver hair curled round his shoulders
Red eyes gleamed deeply
Like watchful rubies in his snow white face
Quiet, pensive, reflective
Yet his true beauty grew from his hidden wisdom

Cedric of the Kitsune grew bonny
Free as a conflagrant wildfire
Long flaxen hair flowed down his back
One black eye and one white eye
Stared mischievously from his sunset face
Mystical, tranquil, affable
Yet his true beauty stemmed from his love for his family

Nikolai of the Tengu grew temperately
Passionate as a whirling windstorm
Long breezy black hair rained down his back
Intense golden eyes stared from his rich dusky face
Emotive, fierce,
Yet his true beauty was rooted in his protective spirit

Wow, that's going to need its own zip code when it is done!

^Believe it or not, that's just Part 1 of 11!

^That's what I mean, it is going to be huge.

Warm days are back! No snow!

I can smell spring in the air!

I heard birds this morning!

Don't you have birds that are there all year, Kyle? I've heard crows nearly every morning this winter. I like crows They're surprisingly big. Magpies can also let their voices be heard lol. There are also some smaller ones that were here all winter, but I'm not sure of their names.

Sure, but this is early morning during the warm season type that I was referring to.

ah, the migratory birds... Pretty amazing the distance they fly every year.

They do have the right idea, though.

Labor, Interior, and State left.

Beautiful sunrise today.

It's dark at night here. and it's dark now cus it's night here.