Personal or professional motivation for a character?

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Kraichgauer
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27 May 2020, 12:42 am

ironpony wrote:
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Maybe your cop character gets fired for going beyond regulations. Maybe he/she has personal demons driving a fanatical need to solve the case, such as having had a loved one hurt by a suspect involved in said case.


Oh well I didn't want to make the character have a tragic backstory to motivate him, because that doesn't seem right for this kind of story. It's more like a story like say, Die Hard, where you have an ordinary average joe cop, thrust into an extraordinary situation, but with no tragic backstory.


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27 May 2020, 1:13 am

That's true, but at the same time, I am having trouble motivating a character to do a crazy thing, and it's often suggested, if you want him to do something crazy, just give him a tragic backstory. But is it possible for a character to choose do something crazy, without a tragic backstory to make him do it?



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27 May 2020, 3:23 am

ironpony wrote:
I wrote a crime thriller screenplay, and some readers don't believe that a main character, a cop, would go above and beyond his duty and the law to achieve his goals. They say cops don't do that because they would be fired and have to deal with the consequences. So they said that I should not have him step beyond his duty and at all, and totally remain within the law.

But then he is just following his superiors orders, and has much more limited personal motivations of his own. Unless that's good, because it makes him as a character more plausible, since realistically, police follow orders, and do not want to anything stupid to jeopardize their careers?


Where do these readers even come from, are they just internet critics? I mean when it comes down to it if you have a story you want to write, just do it...see if you can find a publisher or publish it yourself. I mean even in movies there are cop characters who do that sort of thing all the time so I don't see how that would be too crazy for a book. Or if you are really unsure you could make it a bit of a fictional universe where things work a bit differently than regular real life(doesn't have to be a super crazy world or anything could be just like a slight variation of the real world).


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27 May 2020, 3:49 am

Oh okay, thanks. They are just readers who are writers in writing groups I got connected with.