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do you like it
Poll ended at 01 May 2006, 6:46 am
yes 38%  38%  [ 3 ]
yes 38%  38%  [ 3 ]
no 13%  13%  [ 1 ]
no 13%  13%  [ 1 ]
not my kind of stuff 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
not my kind of stuff 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
i am a pro and you suck 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
i am a pro and you suck 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Total votes : 8

Laura
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01 Apr 2006, 6:46 am

Well i thorght that this was alright:
Metaphosis

I am a Komodo Dragon ready to kill
For the next meal
But the human’s dangle the meat, I want it, I need it, but it takes the will
Of a saint to get it

There is a cat inside of me waiting
Unaware of the time I will need to pounce
But I will wait until the others are hurting
To protected those from others like me

There is an owl in side of me sitting in the night
Waiting for the next unnecessary fight
With in the silent mists of the haunting forests
Of South America

There is a tiger inside of me lost with in my territories
Seeing my own type getting hunted
Humans killing feeling lost with in the grasps of the stories
Hoping not to be found out by the others

There is a wolf inside of me crying out to the moon
As the night passes I know soon
The pack will follow and preparing for the adventure
Waiting for the pack, worried for the pack

There is a monkey inside of me with unknown intelligence
A mind full of creativity
But with no one to share it with, yet is happy in the present time
Thinking about this world can feel like the gravity
Has taken your brain



larsenjw92286
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01 Apr 2006, 8:50 am

That is great, Laura! I like it!


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21 Apr 2006, 7:22 pm

Neat! Reading it is like being the creature itself on the hunt :)


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