Don't Speak

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I'm not trying to overload this forum, but I wrote a poem like 5 seconds ago and figured I'd share.
It's called "Don't Speak."

Don't speak
I know what you mean
I saw it all yesterday
Thought it was only a dream
Now life is moving forward
And I don't know what to think
Maybe things really aren't always what they seem

As we trickle through time
Drops of water falling in line
Each day is new
But everything is the same
Now I see everything has changed

As we step through the door
Let our thoughts fall to the floor
This new room
A new beginning
Maybe it will have a better ending

Through your eyes I see the past
All those things that never last
Open your eyes
Look in your heart
This is where the future starts

So don't speak
Just listen to me
I can see tomorrow
We're chasing our dreams
Now life is moving forward
And I know not to think
Things don't always have to be what they seem

That flows musically. You should look into song writing. It's really quite nice, though short if it were to be a song.

And your avatar... you look like my brother. Odd.

kip wrote:

[quote]That flows musically. You should look into song writing. It's really quite nice, though short if it were to be a song. [quote]

I think so too! Do you have an interest in songwriting?

I do, a bit. Mainly I just like to write what pops into my head. I suppose it could be a song.
Thanks for your comments tho.