Frankenstein's Fury- One of my current projects

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17 Mar 2006, 5:25 pm

Right now, I'm trying to write the most politically incorrect and offensive screenplay ever. It's called Frankenstein's Fury and it's about a mentally challenged boy who murders three other children and ends up being put on trial. At the end of the story, he ends up in the electric chair.
He isn't a very likeable character, but then, neither is anyone else in the screenplay. The day care center owner is a whiny old woman, the ret*d boy's parents are a parody of a stereotypical '50s sitcom type couple, the judge goes too far in trying to dress and act like Mr. T, and the boy's "friends" at his day care are bullies.The most likeable character in my screenplay is probably the cop who arrests the boy, even though he's a selfish, conceited jerk.
You get the idea. Of course, in addition to being really weird, the screenplay also adresses the serious question of whether the ret*d boy was capable enough to know the difference between right and wrong, or even if it would matter at all if he did or didn't.
I'm trying to make it both as disturbing and as emotionally touching as possible.
What do you guys think of the concept?



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17 Mar 2006, 9:38 pm

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Interesting concept, but if you're trying to make the most politically incorrect and offensive screenplay ever, then you should probably throw in a subplot where mutated survivors of an atomic bomb go to a S&M clubs with graphic scenes involving needles and private parts, plus an end moral saying the Nazi's were right. Also put in some sodomy with animals, a transvestite cutting of her old penis with a chainsaw and then handing it to another transvesitite who needs a penis (and him sewing it on), a guy going postal and using a severed cow head to make everyone around him vomit (the severed cow head would the from a cow who was involved in sodomy--also use penguins for that part), America's political right and left launching nukes at one another (yes, the left launches nukes--see, the democrats and republicans are basically the same), Mormon polygamists saving the world, Jesus impaling George W. Bush with an Iraqi flag, midget suicide bombers in wheelchairs going up against genetically modified corn (corn that needs milking), and a 6 year old Christian nut nailing his penis to a cross to prove how faithful he is to his religion.

Now THAT would be politically incorrect and offensive.



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18 Mar 2006, 12:15 am

pfffft, you can't call anything the most offensive unless aborted feti are involved somehow, preferably as delicacies.


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18 Mar 2006, 1:33 pm

Well, OK, not THE most politically incorrect and offensive screenplay ever, just one of the most politically incorrect and offensive. It portrays straights, gays, whites, blacks, hispanics, asians, Christians, Jews, Muslims, ret*ds and geniuses as all being either idiots or as*holes.
As for that republican/democrat idea, that's represented by the two attorneys in my screenplay, one of whom wears an all-red suit and has a shaved head, the other of whom wears an all-blue suit and has a shaved head.