Finished my song on AS: feedback anyone?

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06 Mar 2010, 10:11 pm

Curious what you guys think. It might not be what you're expecting. Hope it doesn't offend anyone...

First song on my player called "Autist."

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06 Mar 2010, 10:43 pm

I couldn't find it - is there a way to send a direct link?



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06 Mar 2010, 11:13 pm

Wish I had the server space for that. It's the first song on the player though. Sometimes myspace can be really slow so I'm getting my own individual player to put on my website. Seems to be working fine now though.



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07 Mar 2010, 12:43 am

Sounds really pissed off! :D :D :D
Neat.

EDIT: Actually after a couple other tracks, your music in general is actually pretty awesome. I'm digging the dark sound.


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07 Mar 2010, 5:48 am

Thanks! I'm releasing a new album this year.



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08 Mar 2010, 10:18 am

TheHaywire wrote:
Thanks! I'm releasing a new album this year.


Do you have any other methods of buying your music, as the majority of your limited released albums sold out? I prefer CDs over digital-only, but I'm not picky. :D


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08 Mar 2010, 3:45 pm

Right now all my work is available digitally (iTunes, amazon, etc.) though you should also be able to get a hard copy of "Annihilation Chic" in a few days. Just working on transitioning my record label site before putting the store back up.



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08 Mar 2010, 4:09 pm

Sounds good :D
Is lyrics somewhere? I don't trust my ears. And you know, I speak spekh-troom :lol:


I'm a little jealous of your voice, it's so girly. I sound like I was deep in well.


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12 Mar 2010, 2:56 pm

Valoyossa wrote:
Is lyrics somewhere?
I second Valoyossa's question -
Can we have the lyrics, please? :)


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16 Mar 2010, 2:29 pm

I like to mix my girly voice with harsher production. Jealous of girls who have deeper voices actually. Heh. Though distortion can come to play at and time.

The lyrics:

Autist

don't understand your social cues
your petty signals pick and choose
your non-verbal communication
i'm in my own world limitation
watching the rest of them
walking away
obsessive interests
social decay

i'm on the spectrum!
don't wannabe a neurotypical sheep
examine the spectrum!
why should i sit and watch you sleep? (X2)

i'm on the spectrum!
an alternative way of viewing it all
dissecting the spectrum!
why should i answer humanity's call? (X4)

don't understand your hidden speak
who are you to call me weak?
failing to connect with norms
unable to fill out forms
filling out my own design
watching every group resign
standing up without my feet
marching to a different beat

i'm on the spectrum!
an alternative way of viewing it all
dissecting the spectrum!
why should i answer humanity's call
why should i answer humanity's call?