Rough draft of my graphic novel

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This is just the first page of the novel

Just a suggestion, but maybe you should type the speech bubbles on Word and then paste them onto the page. Your handwriting's a little tricky to read.

If your using MS Paint, there is as function to place text, even directly to the background. Still good to use MSW, for spell check. Even without that, It's much faster to type than draw letters like you did.

Also, you should consider drawing stuff on paper, and scanning it into a computer. Paint drawings are just painful.

Page 2

lmao, kind of twisted . I actually really like it.

What are you using to draw the pictures? Is it computer, or just pen and ink? Your anatomy could use some work, but then again, that might take away from things.

I think the layout of the pictures is good (the way the characters are situated) and the grey background on the second page is very effective.