Beautiful voice!
Not sure how you were recording it, and maybe this has to do with how you were getting the music to be part of the mix (sounded like a player in the background - far too quiet), but from the sounds of your vocals, if you could figure out a way to get closer to that mic, and really belt it, I bet we'd all be blown away!
Of course, that would probably drown out the music, but you know what?
I wouldn't care!
I think that voice would carry on its own! Seriously!
Try playing the music trough headphones, and just singing (I'm dead serious!). Forget about us hearing the music. You'll have the music to keep time, and if you really belt it out, you'll have no problem hearing yourself too.
Ten to one you get great reviews from me, even without the music.
Don't be so afraid of that mic though! Download Audacity (it's free!). It has meters in it that'll help you guage your levels so you don't overdrive your soundboard. Otherwise it won't sound too good. But if you can get that volume up, well....
WATCH OUT!
Keep it up girl! All you can do is get better!
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