A poem by me

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Life is a puzzle scattered all around, up in the air, all over the ground. Life is a silent movie filled with subtitles, loud as sirens, with no sound. Life is a crispy leaf crackling under your shoe in the Fall, an inspiring picture up on your bedroom wall. Life is a lesson without drawbacks, a sidewalk with no cracks. Life is an endless sea, no greater then how you wish it can be.

That is a nice poem, it offers an interesting and engaging view of what life is.

The bit where it says 'loud as sirens, with no sound' is a bit contradictory, but that may just have been the way I interpreted it, or maybe it has something to do with comma placement.

Anywho, that's a nice poem. I have always been good at creative writing however I was always bad at poetry. You should be proud of oyur writing abilities. I wish I could write poetry as good as you!

dream to fly
reach out for the sky
the journey there
is almost worth the fall

wrote this two years after being murdered. says it all.