I mean this in the best possible way, but perhaps you should check your spelling? Still, that's what word processing is for (at least half of it). Since you're going to be sending your work out into the world, let someone you trust read the manuscript. No one, no matter how good they are, has ever turned in a perfect first draft, which is why they're called first drafts...
Keep at it...and good luck.
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