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22 May 2011, 5:23 am

Calista Springer would be turning 20 today if she were still alive, she was reportedly diagnosed with PDD, and well she died a tragic death at the hands of her abusive Dad and Step-Mom, both of who are now in prison for their crime.

Please learn more about this girl and do what you can do keep others from being abused the same way she was, thanks and God bless

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Ryan McReynolds
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[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Jqsx1nI2LY[/youtube]



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22 May 2011, 10:45 am

Hi man, this is a great thing to have done, her death was unjustifiable, a crime that should not be forgotten.
I saw the vid and my comment is try to improve the pitch, it is way too high and sounds like...umm... honestly I thought it was kind of a bad taste joke, and I hope to be wrong. Honestly, if people at ebaumsworld or 4chan see it, they'll have LOT of cannon fodder for their jokes against AU/AS/PDD people.


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22 May 2011, 4:37 pm

To be quite honest, it was terrible.

I don't have a clue what you were trying to do with the instrumentals. The vocals sounded like a bad attempt at a falsetto. I could barely understand the lyrics.

I'm sorry, that's what I think.