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preludeman
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29 Jan 2009, 10:05 pm

I Love thee with a pure love. This love is as pure as refined gold.
Do not turn me away from thy presense , for I would die without thee.
Thou is the sun in my life, and I am but a plant reaching out to thee.
Please tell me if thou feels the same way?


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29 Jan 2009, 10:41 pm

nice poem, i like the metaphors



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02 Feb 2009, 9:31 am

Thank you for your response . WP is one of the few places I can express myself.


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19 Aug 2011, 4:19 pm

I like your poem very much, it sounds tenderly to me. Thanks for sharing : )