PastFixations's Poem Writing

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Here's something I do on the odd occasion just out of nowhere. Also I'm on a phone so where a full stop is, it is meant to go down a line. More to come. Anyway:
Am I the lucky one to be alive. My heart has flickered a flame. You gave me the power to strive. With you, I feel no shame. The sun has rose in the horizon. It's really a sight to behold. I store this in me like a Dyson. My love will never go cold.

Does love always feel like a wave. Never that sure to go or stay. Through our rants and our raves. I hope that they become astray. My passion burns through the icy butter. Is this really a true romance? As the room starts to shatter. When it ended, at each other we glance. I can sometimes be unforgiveable. I thought we could sort through by laughing. I hope you know you were more to me than just fable. Will you be by my side when I die from coughing.

I like the bit about the Dyson... : )

Haha, I thought that was too cheesey.
I may be a little oblivious. At that I would like to question. Would you see that I am loving and humourous. Put the badness out of the equation. I may not be a savant. That is not rocket science. Though I am quite gallant. I am much like an electric appliance.

All I wanted is you by my side. Not to be hurt from you so bear this in mind. I wish that our love will bide. As to find one like you is so hard to find.

moved from Love & Dating to Art, Writing, and Music

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