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JakobVirgil
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30 Jun 2012, 10:27 am

Chapter 1
Chapter 2

I don't take criticism well just tell me I am awesome :wink: 8O :x :lol:


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30 Jun 2012, 12:49 pm

I liked it.



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30 Jun 2012, 3:13 pm

thank you very much.
A compliment from a pole warms my heart y'all are the best writers going.


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03 Jul 2012, 5:07 pm

Chapter 3 : the Magician
Chapter 4 : the witch
Chapter 5 : The Wolfman part 2


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05 Jul 2012, 3:52 pm

Chapter 6 : The Phoenix Job


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