aspergian communicates with aliens

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hi my name is kevin kilby i am 29 i was diagnosed once last year and once this year with asperger i live on a 8 acre farm but my mom moved out and now my brother and i cant afford the taxes 1400 dollars a month plus utilties please someone help me publish this story sorry no puntation and bad spelling it all started in 2020 when a young couple had a child the farther was a austruant and the mother was a astro phycist they named the boy ryan after o ryans belt ryan was a unique boy at the age of three he knew his alphapet in three different languages and knew how to write in cursave but there also was something strange about him he always played by him self and was not good at comminicating with others even though he started speaking at a very young age he couldn't seem to commincate with people in a traditional sence he also had meltdowns and would sream if things were to loud or someone touched him in a certain way or in situtions he just didn't understand his mother and father were very concerned about him so at the age of five they took him to a doctor and
right away the doctor knew what it was he said since 1945 there was a doctor named hons aspergers in austria he found kids that had autism like features but could still talk and were usaully average to above average IQ he told them that this was called asperger syndrume name after the doctor hons asperger he also went on about the symtumes that they lack eye contact most people with aspergers find it hard to maintane eye contact it is very hard for them they have a hard time looking and listening at the same time and in some cases can phycically hurt them it is like looking into the sun for to long they also lack the abilty to interpit facial exprections such as being able to tell if some one is mad or sad or happy this leads to anxiety and there also is the big factor of the inablity to socailize they want to but don't really know how so they seem anti socail and rude when in fact they can't help it they also some times have meltdowns cuased by many things some times stress from ork or school or secory issues people with aspergers have hyper senctivity to there 5 sences such as site hearing touch taste and smell some may have all five senctivties some might only have one or two i think ryns though are touch and sound and also not being able when its there time to talk so they talk over people and they also take things very litarally and don't get sayings like beat around the bush or his head is in the clouds this makes them very difencive becuase they can't tell when someone is joking around with them and dont get jokes so they think people are always making fun of them also there is a lack of epathy they feel empathy it's not that they dont feel it in fact in some cases he found that some people with aspergers can actually feel the pain of others but they don't know how to show it so they seem ampathtic and that can lead to deprestion and a sence of not belonging he said that this is a form of autism spectrume disorder there are usaully three pdd pravasive develomental disabilty nos not otherwise specafied and aspergers we call this aspergers and those are a type of autism spectrume disorders it is a wide rage from people like albert einstien and bill gates too low funtional people who are non verbal for the most part aspergers is very miserius even after all this time we still don't know what its all about but most of the research has came up that it is a type of high functioning autism he recamended that he go to specail ed were they will beable to teach him how to fit in sociallly so the parents did and even though ryan wanted to be in the normal classes special ed was all he knew so he learned to exept it but others would bully him take his lunch money and call him ret*d some even the ones in specail ed that made him sad and not have any friends ryan was very good at austalogy especially coming from a back ground of a austruanot and a astro phycacic he knew all the constalations bye hard and would sit on his roof top with his tellascope for hours looking up at the stars his farther saw this interest and thought if he can't fit in with others maybe he would fit in at space camp so he went and made lots of friends but once summer was over the friends lived so far away and they lost touch so one day as ryan grew older he was about 14 and his teacher recommended this web sight wrong planet it was for people with aspergers and autism so he went on and found lots in commmon with theses people all over the world he thought it was great and often thought he was on the wrong planet and loved the name so one day he started chatting with this boy his name was ozark ryan asked what his real name was and he said ozark ryan scratched his head ozarch thats a very strange name then he asked were he was from he siad zitron ZItron weres that in russai or something he said no it's past o rynsa belt south of the north star ryan laughed ya right he wrote lol
come on i have aspergers but even i know your kidding he responded kidding whats kidding ryan responded hu ya know i really don't know ozarch replied is it have anything to do with kids? ryan scrathed his head um you would think so but i was told it means jokeing around ozark siad whats that he said i know i don't get joking around either din't your parents tell you all about this or your doctor when you were younger doctor he said whats that were i come from we fix are selfs ozark said i never heard of aspergers i just picked up this site off a satalite on my fathers ship o ryan siad you live on a boat? ozark replied whats a boat ryan srached his head and at this piont was very confused so he asumed he was less funtioning then him but then he told him all these things he learned in school and ryn at some subjects were in collage level and some in kindergarden level but ryan knew that what he was saying was pure genuise so ryyan started thinking maybe he is from a diferent planet so they stated talking and found out they like the same things and din;t like the same things ozark also didn't like loud sounds or certain touches and couldnt look people in the eye but he thought this was all normal becuase everyone on his planet was like that and ryan was amazazed a planet that people are just like me wow so he said ozarch i have to meet you is there anyway you can come to my planet called earth ozarch said i have to ask my father if i could use the shuttle tonihgt but ya tonigh! ryan siad wow he thought but how can you get here ozarch said i will punch in your quarans and get there easy so ryayn waited and waited on the roof with his telescope looking for ozarch just when he was about to give up and go to sleep he saw this great big flash in the sky like a lunar eclispse then land in a feid near bye ryan was shocked but racesed down to the field and saw this big suacer like thing just like in the movies and the doors opened ushhh!! and ozarch apeared they both walked up to each other looking on the ground and didnt shake hands ozarch is that you yes ryan it is me and ryan walked into his shuttle and saw a big screen of the earth every town and city in the world intercally detailed to were it was located and a big area with lounge chars and all sorts of sencory machines like a white twirling light flowting on the air used by projectrory and a whole room of stacttick electricity and he also had a bed and he had a blanket just like mine that wieghd as much as mine he siad do you want to see my planet and ryan right away said yes so they went there and when they got there ryan was amazed of the beuty and wilderness ozarch said lots of us like to live far away and commincate more with nature then with each other and ryn saw theses rainbow color mountian with purple cotten candy looking clouds but ozarks said thats what they really were and you could eat them everything in zitron was litaral there were no saying and all the things that earth says as sayings were actually real in zitron
like ef you said i saw a man that looked 20 feet tall there probly was a man in zitron 20 feet tall so ryan met his parents dutraloolooo was his mothers name and his father ironusmus he was a general in the zitron exploreration unit and was planing a trip to earth soon to make realation and they did when they brought ryan home his parents were looking all over for him and there were cops every were they saw this big ship flout down on this corn field and every when was amazed and shocked at the same time the police stared shooting at the ship right away out of fright ryan came out and said no no they saw ryan and stopped shooting but then the ship took off in fright ryans parents said is that what i think it was yes it was aliens from outerspace and you people just scared them away and before you know it there were reporters there a boy who saw aliens and the president of the united states said that he wants to make a apoligy to them and said i will contact them on this wrong planet and he did he found ozarchs sreen name and started talking but ozarch couldnt understand him then his father came online and could under stand him so ozarch sayed weres ryan ryan ? the president said but he's just a disabled 14 year old boy how can he help get ryan ozarch replied and he did and ryan iterpurpeted the presidents apoligy andozarch interputed it for his world leader and siad how is it that ryan is the only one that can understand these aliens and the leader siad we are all like ryan and in are world there is no such thing as disabled so the president was shocked and saw what we were doing to these poeple with disabilties and that they are really specail and zitron and earth helped each other to learn to live with people with disabilties and named ryn the offiacial world inturpeter of both earth and zitron and for ever ryan was known as the aspergian who can comminicate with aliens the end

....Ugh.

I don't want to be the mean one! *leaves*

I know what it's like to have money troubles, Doublek, believe me. Unfortunately, getting your story published for money isn't something we can do here, since there are probably not any posters here in the publishing industry, at least not in a position to arrange your story to be sold to a magazine or book publisher for profit.

That said, I've always imagined myself to be a decent writer myself, so if writing is something you want to do, I can help you out with a few tips.

1) Paragraphs, and more of em. When I see a solid wall of text like you have up there, it looks like too much to read. But if you make more indented sentences, it seems more manageable.

2) Grammar and punctuation. You have, have, HAVE to have every word spelled right and every grammar rule followed before you submit anything to be published for money. Yes, they have editors and proofreaders at publishing companies, but in the age of spellcheck and grammarcheck on Microsoft Word, they're going to have little patience for a science fiction writer who misspells the word astronaut.

3) Do your research. Science fiction may seem like just making up a lot of fanciful stuff, but sci-fi fans tend to know their science, and you better, too. For example, the constellation you were referring to at the beginning is called Orion's Belt, not Oryans's Belt.

Please, don't take this criticism harshly. God knows, I could have used someone to criticize MY early works, then maybe I'd be a professional writer now instead of a babysitter for convicted criminals. Whatever you do, good luck with it.

Kevin, I wish I could help you somehow but I am not even in the USA. I'm from S Africa. (I assume you're American?). I could "ghost-write" the tale for you with correct spelling and punctuation as that's one of my strong points. I do children's writing - am trying to get a publisher but its a long hard road - and am also gathering info and digging into my past to write a book about Aspergers and my life experiences, which I believe would help and encourage many folk within the sutism spectrum as well as hopefully enable neuro-typical people to understand us better.