this is some of the work I've done on my book, it's not nearly finished, so expect some flaws... I would like to know if anyone has an opinion about it, and if you enjoy it, let me know! ok?
The story of Wood Town
Violet’s Shadow
One day, in Wood Town…
It was early in the summer. Little Annebell and her mother were out for a walk in the town park. They stopped at an ice cream stand.
Annebell got excited and asked,
“Hey Mommy! Can you buy me some ice cream?”
Her mother, Lola Violet then said,
“Of course Anny! You’ve been a good girl by getting your chores done. I’ll buy some ice cream for you.”
So while Lola waited in line at the ice cream stand, Annebell ran over to the playground. The first thing she did was jump off the swing set, even though her mother always told her not too. She jumped off the swing set several times, until she hit her head into another little girl. That’s when she met Tina Grey. Tina’s mother Gloria Grey was nearby and ran over to protect her child.
Gloria yelled at Annebell,
“How dare you hurt my little girl!”
That’s when Annebell’s mother Lola Violet, ran over to protect her child.
Needless to say, Lola and Gloria did not get off to a good start… as for Annebell and Tina, unknown to their mothers, they began to play together at the playground just about every weekend.
thats just half of what I got done, theres plenty more still to do...
19 Nov 2012, 5:01 pm
