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butterfly222
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06 Dec 2012, 8:12 am

It's weird, strange, and different. That's why I like it. I know they are Neopets, but it offers some realism with surrealism. It's all in good fun. Don't be scared off by the sexual or pregnancy bit.I'm just searching for someone to write for Sophie, that's it! The rest is background information.I quiet enjoyed it. Just a few things I wanted to point out. Who are these Neopets? You and your Neopets are like humans, who can wear clothing, walk on two legs, etc..... and they call you Mom, much to your discomfort at first. XD Can you write where you meet the geeky Green Kougra with red hair and thick-lens black glasses and his Starry Xweetok sister, Treixxes, 6, and where they meet Rayden and Mollie, her sister? Here she discovers about all the pets and the new arrival, the Baby Xweetok.

http://www.neopetshive.com/Hive/newbies/index.htm
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Neopets
http://www.neocolours.me.uk/

I laughed, “It's okay, I don't mind. I was... in an accident and hurt my leg, and now it's hard to walk on, that's all,” I said vaguely.
Kalzikin nodded and seemed to let the matter drop.
After breakfast, the kids and I thought we'd take a walk around town. I was very careful to wrap my face and wings in a shawl in case Ryder was out; I didn't want him to recognise me.
Kalzikin pulled impatiently at my shawl sleeve, “C'mon Miss Mollie,” he said, “Let's go!”
I smiled, it was obvious they had never actually been shopping before, with real money no less. “Alright Kallie, let's go,” I said.
Kalzikin stopped when he heard me call him that, and a slow shy smile crept across his face. He ducked away and followed his siblings up the stairs, pushing the trap door open with effort.
Our first stop was to an old thrift shop, but it looked more like it sold antiques. I shooed the kids off to go and find the toys while I browsed the old boxes and bins of arts and crafts. Eventually I stumbled upon a box of old photographs. I sorted through them until I found one that made me gasp. It was me, at maybe four years old, standing next to a little human girl with missing front teeth and braids in her hair. Her eyes shone bright blue, and they struck me in such a way that I was convinced I'd seen them before. I slowly turned the picture over, and gasped at what I read: Mollie and Rayden, 1996. Rayden knew me back then? What was going on?

My mother’s golden locket slipped from my shirt and dangled out over the box delicately. Ginerly I opened it. I remembered.



“Kids, um, I’ll-I’ll take you shopping tomorrow. Miss Moliie has some, erm, personal matters needed attended to. Don’t worry. You can still get a toy and Rafael will watch you.”





“WHAT?! ¡Ah! Vaca loca, el viejo malvado! ¿Quién es esta extraña chica piensa que ella está hablando demasiado?”





(Ah! Crazy, wicked, old heifer! Who does this strange girl think she is talking too?)



I glared at him, pretty sure he wasn’t complimented my excellent grace or beauty or something. I knew one thing though. I needed to find Rayden. The image of her and our mother flashed in my mind. The little sister who was kidnapped when I was 8. She was here.


"Shut up. There is something I have to do. Please, just watch them" And without waiting for a reply, I hobbled away on my bad leg and too police headquarters.


~******~

Rayden:


"Mom,just sayin', your hair is kind of freakin' weird. Couldn't you add some color or touch-ups to that, short, purple hair of yours,? And why you hatin' your wings? Dang, if I was you, I would be so happy I'd fly every day"


"Chantelle, please be quiet. You're really annoying Mom, okay? Just chill with the questions dude" my 12 year old Starry Aisha said, holding Ana, my 1 year old Baby Aisha in his arms. She giggled and laughed. "I think you mean duddette, Sparky"

"Naw, I meant dude" They both laughed.


"SHUT UP!!" Chantelle the 14 year old Red Zafara yelled loud enough for the whole UNIVERSE and market to hear.


I sighed, trying to fight the urge to tape both their mouths shut. Why had I created six pets again, became a mom, and grown wings? I looked at the purple wings in disgust. They were such a pain. I had somewhat managed to make a small fortune from stocks and games, but by no means was I rich with four kids and everyday expenses"


Julia the 13 ear old Faerie Kougra hobbled over with her wooden cane and shook her head. " You guys should stop giving Mom such a hard time. Settle down now. Mom is stressed. I sense it."

Chantelle and Sparxx each took a deep breath and muttered a soft apology. I smiled gratefully back at Julie and her amazing Faerie gift. Where would we be without it?


I was about to thank her when I bumped and accidentally knocked over a familiar looking Xweetok. She picked up her groceries, looked like she was about to snap a witty retort, but instead, burst into tears. Turns out, her house had burned in a fire, and she was in a temporary shelter with four small pets.

'W-ha-wha-what do-do-do I-I dooooo? They are trying to take Vanessa and Cookie, a Baby Lupe, my youngest ones, because I can't pay rent, and she is an Uc Baby Kougra. She ran away from the person trying to trade her. What kind of shelter is this? For God sakes, they're only three!"


What was I supposed to do but invite her to stay with us until she got back on her feet? Her pets, including Lunab, a 8 year old Christmas Xweetok, and Jazmin, a Chocolate 11 year old Cybunny, both friendly, greeted me warmly. All except one little Jelly Kacheek with an eye-patch. She glowered and muttered something about "stupid strangers" under her breath. I sighed. We -er,um I sure had our-I mean my- work cut out for us-me.


Veronica snuffled and took my hand as we walked up the path to the boat leading towards Shenkuu. I was flustered and nervous, andmy tail swished back and forth in pleasure. We both glowered at one another.


"Don't think that kiss or me taking your hand meant anything" she muttered, embarrassed. I could only smile for some reason on the cute frown on her face. No, it meant nothing. I swear.


~******~


1 month later


How had this happened? I now had 12 pets and a monstrous, nagging British b***h at my home We fought like an old married couple. Great!! I was thinking this while tending to the garden when I suddenly heard a rustle. Looking up, I saw three pets staring at me shyly and guilty with carrots in their hands. They were a 8 year old Ice Xweetok holding a 3 year old Baby Cybunny, and a 9 year old Shadow Xweetok with a beat up guitar. I learned their names were Zoey, Indigo, and Lokhart, and they were orphans. How could I turn away such innocent children? Oi, I had grown soft.


I sighed and beckoned them into the house. Looks like we had 3 new additions to our family. What?! Did I just say that?????! !! !!


~*****~


It was nighttime and all the younger kids were settled into bed, except Lunab, who was making Christmas cookies with Jazmin, Chantelle, and Sparxx. The girl had a major Christmas obsession.


I was just walking down the hallway when I slipped on a skate and fell on top of Veronica. Her bra strap slipped delicately down her dark purple tank top. I so badly wanted to tear that shirt off and see those plump breasts.... no, oh crap, I had to get out of here.


"Wha-wha our you thinking, you dirty pervert?" she stuttered trying not blush and stare at my own chest. I blushed and hurriedly got off and out the door. I needed a drink.


~*****~


I don't know how it happened. One minute I am at a tavern and somehow I drank a lovers potio, and ended up back at home, wanting one thing. Veronica.


She was chopping vegetables when I burst through the door, staring at here hungrily. I was going to tear off that shirt-tonight.


"Where were you? I was worried sick. Have you been drinking? Why are you staring at my chest like that?"


I just pulled her towards the bedroom and threw her down. She whimpered, yelled, and screamed for me to GET OFF, but she was victim of the spell too. Both our shirts and bras came off, and our breasts were exposed. Her nipples stood erect and ready for sucking. Her breast fell warm and steady in my paws. She sighed and moaned with pleasure as I kissed down her stomach and ate her out. My tongue explored places and sensations it never had experienced.I loved every minute of it, spell or not.


And that's how Veronica became pregnant, which we found out from the doctor three-days later. It was the Pregnancy potion variety, and whoever, regardless of gender, made love, a baby was made and stayed in the womb for two months. Veronica wouldn't even look at me as I tried to catch her gaze. What had I done?



Sophie


I stayed curled up under the tree I had found. It was a nice, shady chestnut tree in the forest. I looked at myself, swishing my unfamiliar tail in front of me. Sighing, I smoothed out some of the wrinkles in my dress. It had been such a weird day. I was just fine reading under my tree, until this stranger had been passing by…. I remembered him looking at me strangely, his blue eyes peering out from under his hat at me, and smiling. It was a slightly unsettling smile. Then he had disappeared into the forest as quickly as I had seen him. Now… I shook my head, trying to think of what had happened after that. Surely there was an explanation as to why I was a Royalgirl Zafara?

From one of the bushes my enlongated ears caught the sound of a rustle. I turned my head, gathering me dress near me and wrapping my tail around myself. I hoped whatever it was wasn’t going to try and eat me- I didn’t think I could run! My ears twitched again as the rustling grew a little louder and then stopped.

To my surprise, out hopped a Desert Xweetok. Its bushy tail waved behind it, but it froze as it saw me, and seized up. Her eyes got really wide, and looked about ready to scramble back into the bush.

“Tyranima? Tyra, what’s-“ The shadow Lupe stepped out. His pelt was darker than one I’d seen before, but the tip of his tail was stark white almost. He hesitated also. They both seemed young, very young, small and probably not very able to defend themselves. He took a step forward, flicking his tail protectively around the little Xweetok.

Tyra hunkered down, making herself more protected by the Lupe’s form. “I thought there wasn’t anybody over here, honest I did Night….”

The Lupe just nodded, keeping his eyes on me. I shifted uneasily, wishing I could be just a bit smaller…. Maybe I could slip away behind the tree. “Um…” I said instead, my voice barely squeaking out. “…Hi?”

Awkward silence fell. My fingers twitched with nervousness. What was I doing? I should run, maybe…. No, I should just stay still. No, I should run and hide. They’d probably leave me alone if I just stayed still. I dropped my gaze to me hands in my lap. But…. They seemed so young…. The Lupe couldn’t be older than 8, maybe, and the little Xweetok maybe five. I was seventeen, and I probably towered over them if I stood up. But I didn’t want to. I glanced up, and Tyra was glancing at me from under Night, who seemed to be debating what to do, his ears cocked at odd angles as he stared at another bush, almost watching for something.

“Uh….” Another noise slipped out before I could hold it in. I cringed as they both looked at me.

“… Let’s… Try another way, Tyra….” Night nudged her a little.

“But…. She doesn’t seem mad at us or mean…. Maybe she’s lonely.” Tyra whispered, but my sensitive ears picked it up. I shuffled my feet a little bit.

Night must have sensed my unease. He looked over at me again pensively. While he did Tyra snuck out from under him and craned her neck towards me. Did I smell interesting? I probably did. I wonder if I smelled like a human…. I shifted and sort of reached my hand out. What was I going to do, wave at them? Try to shoo them off? No, I couldn’t do that. They were just kids……

Slowly, Tyra made her way out from under her protector. He looked about ready to protest but the words died in his mouth. He watched his little friend inch out, until she was about an inch from my hand. She sniffed it diligently, then put her head on it and rubbed it around. It felt good, a little calming…. Like a snuggle. Like when…. When my sisters would snuggle me when I felt bad… I frowned. The Desert girl looked up and her little smile faded as she saw my frown, and she backed up.

“No! Wait!” I tried to recover, trying to smile again but it just faded as I got more distressed. “I… er…. Sorry…” My hand fell a little and trembled.

The tilted her head, confused. I dropped my gaze, sighing. How could I mess up on something so small? Maybe this was why I always kept to myself. I was terrible with other people… I always got it wrong…

Tyra caught me by surprise by snuggling into my side. “You seem nice.” She purred.

I watched her a little, wide eyed and speechless. “…Thanks…” I whispered, barely managing to get the word out of my system. Maybe I could figure out who they were without scaring them off if I was really careful. “Um…. So… What are you doing out here?”

“….We ran away from the pound.” Tyra told me, her voice getting softer.

“Oh…” I felt my face soften a bit. “Why?”

“Well…. Night and I were both there and we became good friends but then some people came in who wanted to adopt me that he knew were really bad people, and I got all scared so he helped me escape and we ran away….. And I miss my old people….” She whimpered.

“Aw, I’m sorry…. I’m Sophie.” I told her, hoping she wouldn’t cry. It just broke my heart everytime I saw someone cry- human or pet.

“That’s a nice name… I’m Tyranima and that’s Nightwind…. You seem really nice. Why are you here all alone?” She asked me, sort of smiling again.

“Well…. It’s kind of a long story. I was here reading my book and-“ I WAS reading my book… I cast a quick glance around. Speaking about my book, it was gone. Vanished. I sighed. “Well… I’ll tell you a little later, okay?” I carefully stood up. Nightwind approached, still a bit hesitant, but trusting his little friend’s judgment of character. “How about we just find somewhere safe to talk… And maybe a little to eat?”

Tyra’s eyes brightened. “Yeah! That sounds awesome!”

I glanced at Night, and he sort of nodded, as if just realizing how hungry he was. “Okay….” I picked a direction other than the one they had come from and started walking. Glancing up at the sun, I let out a small sigh under my breath. This was going to be a long day.

Story bit someone wrote for me, then backed out.