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04 Feb 2013, 6:33 pm

Oh my god I think I think I think I have a
wait!
Oh no!
I can't hold it any longer.
Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!



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04 Feb 2013, 6:54 pm

Are we supposed to applaud that or just snap our fingers?


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04 Feb 2013, 7:02 pm

Come on Fnord, lay some of your poetry on us.



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04 Feb 2013, 9:02 pm

http://hitchhikers.wikia.com/wiki/Vogon_Poetry

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04 Feb 2013, 10:45 pm

Pianist wrote:
Oh my god I think I think I think I have a
wait!
Oh no!
I can't hold it any longer.
Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!


Beautiful. It perfectly captures the experience of sneezing right at the quiet moment in the concert.


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05 Feb 2013, 6:49 am

Who_Am_I wrote:
Pianist wrote:
Oh my god I think I think I think I have a
wait!
Oh no!
I can't hold it any longer.
Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!


Beautiful. It perfectly captures the experience of sneezing right at the quiet moment in the concert.


Thank you. I'll be publishing many more soon.



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05 Feb 2013, 7:28 pm

I had read some rather prosy poems I had written years ago at poetry readings at bars or book stores. As an Aspie, it hadn't been the easiest thing I had done, but I did enjoy the applause and whispers that I was good.

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