What's your opinion on this romantic poem I wrote?
Here's an explanation for one of the verses: Me and this person can't date now because we're Muslim and we're not adults yet.
Can’t you see that I’m all soft for you?
Can’t you see how much you make me want you?
I love you with every ounce of my desire
I just wanna hold you, both in my heart and in my arms
I wanna hold you and protect you and never let go
While you feed my heart with your care
I see you and blush, if only you could see
I dream and dream and wish it was real
Oh well I say, I could wait till its time
Though upset we can’t date, for we are still youth
For now I want to be friends
And if we can date in the future, that would be swell
If it will be, it is
You have changed how I see
You make me feel weak, driven by my longing
A man is not used to thinking with emotion
But you make me forget my fancy textbook
That says to think with no bias
I long to be friends with you, more than anything in this world
I wish to give you my heart, and look into yours
And breathe a whisper of comfort
That we can protect each other forever
As garments, as one
You are my one and only
What I feel for you is my special invitation
That no one can take away
Except you
If you say no
It would really hurt
For now, I won’t worry
I only want to dream and dream
Love you and love you
Give you my life
Give you my breath
And feed you from my loving hands
And all I want is your love
My darling
My sweetheart
My ___________.
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