Page 1 of 1 [ 2 posts ] 

barber
Veteran
Veteran

User avatar

Joined: 24 May 2007
Age: 37
Gender: Male
Posts: 653
Location: buncrana co.donegal ireland

03 Apr 2013, 9:23 am

given that this is this is the forum for writes I felt like posting a poem here for you to read it kind of reflects my frame of mind at the moment so enjoy(if that is the right word)

Lost in chaos

Lost in a swirling world of choas
Feeling the world crumbling beneath my feet
Struggling to cope with the chaos
Consumed by stress
Eaten alive by that which should by controlled
Fading into the blackness of my mind
Unable to see the light of those around me.

Unable to seek the help needed to survive this chaos
Over reaching the past
Defeated by the present
Chased off by the future

The only given in this world is the all consuming chaos
The darkness of fate and
All consuming shadow of the past
Possibly doomed to by repeated
No mater how much I struggle agents it

I am lost
Lost within the chaos
Beyond help.



Teasaidh
Raven
Raven

User avatar

Joined: 26 Jun 2013
Age: 41
Gender: Female
Posts: 102
Location: Kentucky

28 Jun 2013, 8:08 am

the counsellor become the counselled
the predator, the prey
stripped of all power
she'll never last the day
wretched anonymity
death is vulnerability
aching continuity
aching as they cage my soul daily


_________________
?To be yourself in a world that is
constantly trying to make you
something else is the greatest
accomplishment.?
-- Ralph Waldo Emerson