My Love

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this a poem I wrote about three years ago , and was published by poetry.com in one of their books
I hope you like it

MY LOVE
With my arms I am hugging you.
With my lips I am kissing you.
So tightly I do squeeze you.
I don't want to let you go.
What I have for you is an eternal love.
That is pure love from above.
My love continues until my last breath and beyond.
Over the ocean, united, we are star-bound.

Look deep into my eyes and see:
Am I in love, or not? please, tell me.
Listen to my quivering heart.
Is it saying your name ? or what?.
Give me your hands, feel my heart.
Together forever, never to part.

Love, what a small word for what I feel.
You are the only one who can make my heart heal.
You are the lighthouse in my dark sea.
My heart is sealed, but only you have the key.
You are the dream that I don't want to wake from.
You brought me to life from the death I've become.
For your love, my Queen, I do surrender.
But beware, my Queen, my heart is too tender.

Beautiful!! !

Edit:It was my idea for him to post it.

Nice but a bit too heavy on prose.

I loved it! You're a great poet.
I need to learn off you.

That is very nice!