Making my own cartoon, (sort of) interested?

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Ok so I'm sort of making a cartoon, it's not so much a cartoon as a comic, or just a bunch of pictures with words and speech bubbles. it's based on one of the story's I was writing.
I thought about it, since some of the character have mental disability's, although I don't make it too obvious, maybe some people would around here would be interested?
I'm drawing it myself, I kind of rushed the first ones, but I plan to remake it with improved artwork. I'd like to know if anyone here would like the story.

I guess if your interested, I have a video up on YouTube. anyway, I was thinking this would be the best place to talk about it. I hope to make a story the can be enjoyed by people who have autism or things like that.

what do you think? if you want to, maybe someone could help a little somehow?
[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nP75BsLwD_w&feature=player_detailpage[/youtube]

I really like the pages peeling away from each other. I would delete the prologue talking about yourself. The first two girls are nearly impossible to tell apart. What you have here is more a storyboard than a comic, but it is a beginning.
Will it be possible for you to take drawing lessons to increase your skill?

It reminds me of a storyboard. I'm assuming that's where you're going with this.

I think it would do you some good to invest a little time into some practice, and learn perspective so things can be drawn a little bit more accurately. (It's difficult, but even just a little perspective drawing will make a background infinitely better.)

Mark Crilley would be up your alley when it comes to tutorials and the style of art you're using.

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SCW9D2GytHo[/youtube]

This is my result after viewing this video, though it isn't where I want to be. I'm still working on it myself:

[img][800:500]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2013/303/9/7/definitive_lines__finished__by_geekyteen-d6seup6.png[/img]

Remember, lots and lots of practice!

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