Song I wrote called Weightless Things

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Sorry to clog up the sub-forum with song but here is another for you to listen to it. I hope you enjoy it and if you have written anything, please post it into the bottom-

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UHc5hbx6vT4

I really like this. I'm sorry, can't hear the lyrics too well, but think the guitar is beautiful.

Wow, that's beautiful Definitely the kind of music I'd listen to. Thank you.

Ah, thank you very much. Yeah, you bring up a good point. I need to work on my intonation a lot but also I need to get a microphone You probably don't wish to see the lyrics but here they are anyway just in case you interested-

'I've been thinking about all the same old things
Of fallen time and the weight it brings
There's always another point of view,
When the night's sweet dawn has come to soon.
So don't fix your gaze all that fast,
seal the moment and make it last.
There's always another point of view,
When the nights' sweet dawn has come to soon.

All too soon, we give ourselves away.'

wow!! very good! .. (maybe try using a metronome .. make rhythm a little more steady and solid)

Thank you very much! Yeah, that is a very good idea actually. I suppose I could have one through some headphones and then do it through that. Thank you for the idea.

Thanks, I was glad to get to read the lyrics. I like them, and think they fit the music very well...