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17 Feb 2007, 4:37 am
17 Feb 2007, 4:06 pm
17 Feb 2007, 5:14 pm
17 Feb 2007, 5:38 pm
You want an honest opinion?....Pass me the sick bucket.
Them lyrics are so bad they are funny. But thanks for making me laugh.
Check out Dylan's 'She's your lover now' or Cohen's 'Famous Blue Raincoat' for proper lyrics.
This is the direction you should be heading.
Anyway, don't let me disparage you. I think the same about most of contempary pop.
You may go far.
Seriously, good luck.
17 Feb 2007, 8:13 pm
Kosmonaut wrote:
You want an honest opinion?....Pass me the sick bucket.
Them lyrics are so bad they are funny. But thanks for making me laugh.
Check out Dylan's 'She's your lover now' or Cohen's 'Famous Blue Raincoat' for proper lyrics.
This is the direction you should be heading.
Anyway, don't let me disparage you. I think the same about most of contempary pop.
You may go far.
Seriously, good luck.
Them lyrics are so bad they are funny. But thanks for making me laugh.
Check out Dylan's 'She's your lover now' or Cohen's 'Famous Blue Raincoat' for proper lyrics.
This is the direction you should be heading.
Anyway, don't let me disparage you. I think the same about most of contempary pop.
You may go far.
Seriously, good luck.
that's ok i will just give up and slash my wrists
17 Feb 2007, 8:41 pm
bjmax31 wrote:
Kosmonaut wrote:
You want an honest opinion?....Pass me the sick bucket.
Them lyrics are so bad they are funny. But thanks for making me laugh.
Check out Dylan's 'She's your lover now' or Cohen's 'Famous Blue Raincoat' for proper lyrics.
This is the direction you should be heading.
Anyway, don't let me disparage you. I think the same about most of contempary pop.
You may go far.
Seriously, good luck.
Them lyrics are so bad they are funny. But thanks for making me laugh.
Check out Dylan's 'She's your lover now' or Cohen's 'Famous Blue Raincoat' for proper lyrics.
This is the direction you should be heading.
Anyway, don't let me disparage you. I think the same about most of contempary pop.
You may go far.
Seriously, good luck.
that's ok i will just give up and slash my wrists
Haha
Wait to you are famous first.
Your sales will go through the roof.
Like i say, i don't mean to be disparaging.
Keep it up, and keep us informed how you are doing.
I have been meaning to write for years (not just songs).
One of my reasons for posting on forums is to get into the process of writing.
I'm just too lazy; you are making an effort which is admirable.
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