Progressive Death Metal Song

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03 Nov 2014, 4:24 pm

My lyrics so far for what I title: Ghost In The Shell.
I wrote this song about dissociating.

The pressure begins to close in on me
My heart beats loud for me to listen
Thoughts overflow my train of thought
I will subside the pain I could?ve bought

Vast emptiness
Is the last thing they want
I will give them anything but me
A sharp pain within them will surface

The mist
which you see
You touch it and you feel something
It is not me
It is not me

The mist
Which you touch
Is the ghost of me
You can only feel just matter

Matter of an illusion

conundrum
Veteran
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03 Nov 2014, 5:10 pm

Very vivid...that's what a shutdown feels like to me.

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The existence of the leader who is wise
is barely known to those he leads.
He acts without unnecessary speech,
so that the people say,
'It happened of its own accord.' -Tao Te Ching, Verse 17

Justinw728
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18 Nov 2014, 8:32 am

Very deep. I can definitely feel tht..

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Deinonychus

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28 Nov 2014, 12:12 am

Thanks guys, I haven't wrote more of it. I feel like I should. I give myself less credit than I actually get.

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