Do y'all like this song I wrote called "CLEAN LIVIN"?

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22 Jul 2015, 8:46 pm

Feedback: is it really awful? What style of music is it? I want to emulate early 1990s Pop Country music. That is my favorite style! Let me know!




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23 Jul 2015, 5:21 pm

Not a fan of country, but it's not awful. I like it much better than Taylor Swift, that's for sure.


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23 Jul 2015, 7:00 pm

Good job! The only things I might think about is reviewing the tempo and accompaniment arrangement to ensure they compel folks to get up and two-step. My idea of a successful country song is that it is "easy to dance to". (Bonus points for catching the reference to the old American Bandstand TV show. :D )



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23 Jul 2015, 10:24 pm

I believe its a really cheesy song but its the good kind of cheese!



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23 Jul 2015, 10:29 pm

i like it, including the key change. i think there is a market for this. you are talented. it reminds me a little of ragtime music.



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24 Jul 2015, 3:46 pm

cathylynn wrote:
i like it, including the key change. i think there is a market for this. you are talented. it reminds me a little of ragtime music.



Oh thank you. The main part is the message of the song. Its an anti-drug song. And its definitely not rag time. Its good 'ol Country music.