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Sandwichpowers
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10 Nov 2015, 9:05 pm

This is a short piano thing I wrote for an English project. Any suggestions to improve it?

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13 Nov 2015, 12:40 pm

Nice! Just curious, how does this relate to your English class?

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13 Nov 2015, 1:20 pm

I like it! :wtg:

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Sandwichpowers
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31 Dec 2015, 9:24 pm

Thanks! I'm in a seminar English class, so we have assignments where we have to create creative interpretations of literature.

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