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I've always wanted to ask this question so here it is: How do you make a OC's not sound the same where it can come off as a Mary Sue/Stu? This seems to be a problem of mine I think. Like I want to write more fanfiction, I get frustrated with zero feedback and I do want to start writing fanfiction that is not a one-shot or few shots.

Any advice?

I'll accept non-fandom like original fiction as well. Any type of advice would help greatly.

Keep writing and you'll eventually get the hang of it. That you're noticing your OCs being that way is a start! It helps if your OC isn't a love interest of a popular canon character. It also helps if your OC isn't solving all of the canon character's problems. Maybe imagine your OC in their own story with other OCs (set in the same world) and see if that character is still interesting to you. If I can't imagine an OC having their own motivations and doing their own thing, then they'd just be a prop rather than an actual character to me.

I've posted a couple of pieces of fanfic on AO3 and while I've gotten positive comments and kudos, I've never gotten real "constructive feedback" on pieces I've posted online. I understand the frustration with not receiving constructive criticism. I'm not sure how one goes about that aside from proactively asking or offering critiques on other's works.

I have as well on FF(dot)net. But things like this got two reviews. One liking the idea, other wanting more. I wish I would've played up a little more on the oblivious part. I think the story is under misc wrestling with the name "My Wife's Best Friend" By MissBayleef. I want to rewrite that fic. Not feeling it all too much looking at it now.