Surreal (a song I wrote tonight)

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Who I am, you wonder.
Why I always blunder.
Should I try to fake me ?
Am I right to like thee ?

Here I go, like a stranger in your house,
But I need to let you know
'Cause it is a truth I can not soothe
If you do not hear me now.
I read your mind and I see through
I can stay here waiting for you,
I made my choice, I will not mouse
Out of your life without even trying
To let you know a truth not smooth.
I think I have found the right feeling.
And it is surreal because you are
The one who gave me this key
And it is surreal 'cause you are far
From me now and it still goes on.

I can read your mind and see behind
All the things you try to hide.
I do not understand everything you feel
But I can see those you conceal
I promise you I will try to ease the pain,
I will be strong to break your chain.
I will still stand by in good times
And write you some brand new rhymes
Laugh why not, and make up our world,
I will let you come in and we will twirl,
In this wonderland you never imagined.
I think I have found the right feeling.
And it is surreal because you are
The one who gave me this key
And it is surreal 'cause you are far
From me now and it still goes on.

If you need, I will let you go your way,
With the ones you like more than you say,
Just promise me to keep your smile,
'Cause it makes it all worthwile.

Who I am, you wonder.
Why I always blunder.
Now you know who I am
You told me to never sham
I was sure, you understand
Now we both make a strand.

I think I have found the right feeling.
And it is surreal because you are
The one who gave me this key
And it is surreal 'cause you are far
From me now and it still goes on.
It still goes on.
It still goes on.

Of what musical style do you think you will like to have with this?