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preludeman
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29 May 2007, 8:46 pm

I stand alone in a crowded room and with myself.

I stand alone in the vast loud ocean of humanity, and in the silence of my thoughts.

I stand alone to gaze at the cosmos, for the stars do not judge me for being different.

I stand alone and study the stars, and wonder at their beauty and grace.



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29 May 2007, 9:31 pm

that's cool. got any more?



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29 May 2007, 11:41 pm

There is a sonnet in you, I just know it!

For some reason I am reminded of Wordsworth.

"the world is too much with us, late and soon
getting and spending, we lay waste our powers..."



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30 May 2007, 7:21 pm

I wish to Thank those who read and commented on my work. I have written many poems , and I am editing them to publish one day.



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03 Jun 2007, 10:18 am

preludeman wrote:
I stand alone in a crowded room and with myself.

I stand alone in the vast loud ocean of humanity, and in the silence of my thoughts.

I stand alone to gaze at the cosmos, for the stars do not judge me for being different.

I stand alone and study the stars, and wonder at their beauty and grace.



well done. that is a very deep poem.


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