A Poem I have Written, Hope You Like It

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"Screaming"
The feet scream on the concrete.
Everyone occasionally bumps into someone
Because they like bumping into someone
One day, everyone began to scream.
Feet screaming on concrete.
Lightning screaming against the wind.
Voices screaming against the screaming voices.
I think I am going to go insane if this screaming DOESN'T STOP!
Screaming Eric
Screaming Anna
Screaming Heather
Screaming Sir Gamester
Screaming tongues of the world!
All must scream!
Screaming

I like this poem. I can imagine all the screaming going on as I read it. While reading it, I viewed it in my mind as a performance piece, with the poem being read aloud and screams coming from various places from various people, seen and unseen, as it is being read. Good poem.

Thanks.
Unfortunately, I was supposed to be reading today and now that I'm sick, my presentation has to be postponed until Friday at the earliest.
Hopefully I'll remember you when I read.