new poem i wrote just now tell me what youu think

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i cant take this pain

i dont know what to do

every minute i struggle through

seems like days and days

i feel like one who is lost and trapped in the middle of a hedge maze

and is allergic to the all the green walls



i cant go through this anymore

i have to find my way

but i am so lost inside this maze

i am so much in a daze

i cant find my way out of this maze

this maze within my mind

Nice work man. Any other pieces you'd like to share.?