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TheSoullessWhisper
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08 Sep 2007, 6:37 pm

The Fallen Angel”
by Becky Cobb (me)

The angel cries out to the wind,
For she now knows she has sinned.
No more shall she belong to the light above her.
Her life is now nothing but a single blur,
But the new beginning is showing what is near
She can smell the emptiness of fear
The fear brings out the shadow with in her heart
The shadow now tearing her memories a part
The cries that she once knew
Are now true
Will she ever escape from this world
Or Will she just fade?



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08 Sep 2007, 7:15 pm

Theres a kickass band called Fallen Angel :P
Well actually they arent that great lol but anyway..



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08 Sep 2007, 7:38 pm

lol



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08 Sep 2007, 8:40 pm

username88 wrote:
Theres a kickass band called Fallen Angel :P
Well actually they arent that great lol but anyway..


There's also a good song by L'ame immortelle called Fallen Angel. :P

Regardless, very nice poem, Becky.



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08 Sep 2007, 9:06 pm

I cant find that band in the metal-archives, it sounds really familliar though :?
I used to have all the black metal bands memorized, go figure :lol:



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08 Sep 2007, 9:43 pm

Cool poem.

While we're on the off-subject of bands and songs called "Fallen Angel," King Crimson has a track off the 1974 album Red (my personal favorite) called Fallen Angel.



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08 Sep 2007, 10:01 pm

That was a good poem.

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11 Sep 2007, 11:47 pm

There's a good song called "A Fallen Angel"
First time I heard it it was haunting and I was religious for a couple weeks after.
By the way, I am religious in my own way.I just don't follow the churches or the bible.

That poem reminds me of a girl I know.