I'm a writer and I want to share this story with you.

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I wrote this story for the readers to enjoy. I hope you all like it.

http://docs.google.com/View?revision=_l ... 3w9n&hl=en

This is a work in progress. a rought draft. I know I shouldn't be showing others a rough draft unless it's finished. But I really want to show others what I accomplished.

I hope you enjoy it. I happily accept constructive criticism. If there's something in my story that didn't work for you, let me know.

On the scale of one to ten, how would you rate this piece and why?

I would feel a lot better if I had feedback on my work. Positive or negative.

If you enjoy this story and you want to be a dedicated reader. Please send me an IM. (AIM is preferred)

You are an extremely good writer! I could only read the first chapter, but I believe you are very good, and have potential to be an author! Make the plot more spread out though, as you shouldn't be in the forest in the end of chapter one...
8/10

I've read part of it and I'm impressed with what you've done so far. As you said, it is a first draft, and I liik forward to what else you do.

A writer should spend at least 2 hours a day writing.

Wow. I'm happy you enjoyed the story.

Well I'm still accepting readers

I haven't read it, but just as a rule I wouldn't recommend sharing your work publicly before it's published--the risk for plagerism is too high. I instead recommend showing it to your close friends, people you trust, and them alone until it is published.