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05 Apr 2008, 11:07 pm

I kinda laughed when I wrote it. I told my friend I could write about anything, so she asked me to write about cows. Here it is.

Silent Moo

I'd like to say it wasn't me,
to drink from your utter, I mean.

It Must be hard to eat grass all day,
Unaware as you lay...
The world around you...it's evolving,
Maybe you should get walking.

Out of the barnyard as you go.
you'll die sooner than you know.
the price of you is increasing,
the demand for you is repeating.

In the future, you'll be gone.
you wont be gnawing on my lawn.

Biochemically engineered,
is what your product will be reduced to.

So, go to cow heaven,
if one exists.
I know you won't be needed...
your product won't be reseeded.



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05 Apr 2008, 11:47 pm

Little girls it seems to say
Never stray upon your way
Never trust a stranger friend
For no one knows how it will end
As your pretty so be wise
Wolves may lurk in every guise
And as then tis simple truth
Sweetest tongue has sharpes tooth!


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06 Apr 2008, 1:35 am

Microban wrote:
I kinda laughed when I wrote it. I told my friend I could write about anything, so she asked me to write about cows. Here it is.

Silent Moo

I'd like to say it wasn't me,
to drink from your utter, I mean.

It Must be hard to eat grass all day,
Unaware as you lay...
The world around you...it's evolving,
Maybe you should get walking.

Out of the barnyard as you go.
you'll die sooner than you know.
the price of you is increasing,
the demand for you is repeating.

In the future, you'll be gone.
you wont be gnawing on my lawn.

Biochemically engineered,
is what your product will be reduced to.

So, go to cow heaven,
if one exists.
I know you won't be needed...
your product won't be reseeded.


Thats very very good, and funny.



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06 Apr 2008, 1:52 pm

This has inspired me to try to write a five minute poem. I'm going to just write stream of consciousness for five minutes and see what comes out, then post it here.

Back in five...



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06 Apr 2008, 10:18 pm

JohnHopkins wrote:
This has inspired me to try to write a five minute poem. I'm going to just write stream of consciousness for five minutes and see what comes out, then post it here.

Back in five...


You never came back. :P



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07 Apr 2008, 9:07 am

reminds me of the long poem 'the raven'


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